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« Thread Started on Sept 12, 2006, 8:18pm » | |
name:Frostwhisker
Age:20 Moons
Clan: Darkclan
Rank: Deputy
Gender:She-Cat
appearance:Frostwhisker has white fur and a huge gray spot running along her back . In the spot she has darker gray stripes. She has dark green eyes and big paws and very long silver whiskers.
personality: Frostwhisker can be a rude cat but when she gets to know you she gets better. Her solution for everything is to fight and if a warrior from another clan goes on there territory Frostwhisker would either fight or drag them over to her leader, but she would never kill a another cat in cold blood she would only give them hurtful wounds to make sure the never come back again. She likes kits and apprentices but if they don’t listen she would make sure the never misbehave again.
History: Frostwhisker never knew her parents and the closet thing she had to a mother and a father was her mentor. On her last hunt as an apprentices She heard a squirrel and chased it into a bush of bramble, when she got back her mentor was getting killed by five warriors. When they saw her they ran leaving her mentor at the border of starclan.
RP: Frostwhisker launched herself across the clearing and into a bush of bramble after the squirrel. She landed squarely on the squirrel and happily picked up its limp body and flounced back to the spot where her mentor was. Right when her head got out of the brambles her blood ran cold . In front of her was five warriors on top of a bloody body. Frostwhisker didn’t know who was beneath them but at that exact moment the cat turned its bloody head and the eyes looked straight at her. She yowled in pain as she knew whose eyes those where, they were Elmpelts.
codeword:leafbare
I did read the rules I just forgot to put the password. Sorry! And when you post in the sign up board what are you going to say
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« Reply #1 on Sept 13, 2006, 2:50pm » | |
Okay so far it looks good, BUT you still need the code word  Also it's kinda hard to read when you have 2 sections, like your history and rp exsaple, are meshed into one paragraph please seperate them * gives cookies* I believe you can find the code word in the rules.
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« Reply #2 on Sept 13, 2006, 4:03pm » | |
Okay, first you need to post in the sign-up board. Second, you need to put in the code word. Lastly, you need to make the post more neat. Then I'll accept.
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« Reply #3 on Sept 14, 2006, 4:39pm » | |
Age:20 Moons
Clan: Darkclan
Rank: Deputy
Gender:She-Cat
appearance:Frostwhisker has white fur and a huge gray spot running along her back . In the spot she has darker gray stripes. She has dark green eyes and big paws and very long silver whiskers.
personality: Frostwhisker can be a rude cat but when she gets to know you she gets better. Her solution for everything is to fight and if a warrior from another clan goes on there territory Frostwhisker would either fight or drag them over to her leader, but she would never kill a another cat in cold blood she would only give them hurtful wounds to make sure the never come back again. She likes kits and apprentices but if they don’t listen she would make sure the never misbehave again.
History: Frostwhisker never knew her parents and the closet thing she had to a mother and a father was her mentor. On her last hunt as an apprentices She heard a squirrel and chased it into a bush of bramble, when she got back her mentor was getting killed by five warriors. When they saw her they ran leaving her mentor at the border of starclan.
RP: Frostwhisker launched herself across the clearing and into a bush of bramble after the squirrel. She landed squarely on the squirrel and happily picked up its limp body and flounced back to the spot where her mentor was. Right when her head got out of the brambles her blood ran cold . In front of her was five warriors on top of a bloody body. Frostwhisker didn’t know who was beneath them but at that exact moment the cat turned its bloody head and the eyes looked straight at her. She yowled in pain as she knew whose eyes those where, they were Elmpelts.
codeword:leafbare
I did read the rules I just forgot to put the password. Sorry! And when you post in the sign up board what are you going to saycodeword:leafbare
I did read the rules I just forgot to put the password. Sorry! And when you post in the sign up board what are you going to say
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« Reply #4 on Sept 14, 2006, 6:29pm » | |
You could have just modified!
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frostwhisker
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« Reply #5 on Sept 15, 2006, 4:50pm » | |
Yeah I know its just somebody might not see I changed it.
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« Reply #6 on Sept 16, 2006, 8:45pm » | |
Accepted.
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frostwhisker
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« Reply #7 on Sept 16, 2006, 9:43pm » | |
as Deputy?
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« Reply #8 on Sept 17, 2006, 11:35am » | |
yes
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frostwhisker
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« Reply #9 on Sept 17, 2006, 4:50pm » | |
ok, thanks!
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